SCENE
DEVISIONING
TIME: Day
CHARACTERS: Arham
(lead), Mother, Shop keepers, People in the market.
Description: screen goes black. (voice over) As the
dialogue ends the famous Empres Market appears on the screen.
Dialogue: “I
thought having a “boy” as a child was supposed to be a special thing, wonder
why Ma thinks its not, or does she? Well, shes hard to reach, and I don’t have
the strength to ask her…….
Description: The
market street and on the ground, two shadows appear, one of a boy and one of a
women, having the womans shadow of the women is more prominent. Foot steps of
people in the market are shown following different paths sslowly going up
towards the heavily crowded look of the market. The mother is sshown argueing
with the vegetable shop keeper.
Dialogues (mother): “bhai
ye tho app ahi nahi kerahe na, aap sahi daam lagayen tho he hum apke pass
dobara ayenge.
(vegetable man): baji ye tho subha subha ek dum fresh
sabziyan laya hun, aap kya baat kar rahi hain.
(mother): bhai ye apne sahi nahi kiya!
Mother pays to shopkeeper
(mother to Arham): here hold my bag.
Mother hands her bag over to Arham (her son) who’s standing
behind her, aroused by the happenings of the market and he quietly takes the
bag.
Translation
(mother): Brother this isn’t right, please put a reasonable price, only then I
will come to your shop again.
(vegetable man): sister I got these vegetables freshly in
the morning, what are you talking about.
(mother): brother this is unfair.
Description: the
market is shown as Arham sees it and followed by that his face appears scanning
the entire scenario. And so they start walking along the street. He turn’s his
head right, see’s shop keepers weighing fruits and vegetables, and to left,
where he see’s sugar cane being crushed, followed by all other things that
appear into his vision. As he keeps walking, the scenario tends to change.
(diegetic sounds appear on a constant pace). He keeps walking following his
mother, and he sees all sorts of different things happening until at one point,
what he sees starts to disturb him. His eyes catch the fish stall where he can
see the man flapping fish on top of one another, stacking them up. All sizes,
all textures, and his partner shifting small shrimps from one basket into
another. He feels disgusted until he turns his head the other side and she
bright red cloth in air as another shop keeper whips it in the air. He feels
breathless ass it comes as a surprise. (Dialogues and diegetic sounds along
with the back ground music appear on a constant pase).
Things keep coming to him as a surprise within seconds and
he keeps loosing breath, feeling claustrophobic. He looks around trying to spot
his mother who’s busy bargaining around and does not care enough to turn back
and take a look at him. Next he sees the meat stall. The butcher harshly chops
meat, while chicken heads and claws are carelessly scattered on the table, but
nothing stops the butcher. An ordinary job seems so disturbing to Arham.And his
forehead starts to sweat, arms feel heavy, till everything goes blur and slow.
Arham falls to the ground, people gather, and now, his mother decides to turn
and look. (Opening credit ends).
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